Friday, April 8, 2011

April 8 no April 6

April 6

this is what the eagle do: sit

does sits

something beneath her breathes there

breathe something

do river go

(Mississippi) goes breeze

fine white feathers from her nape

lifts mom eye, eagle eye

the feathered

comfort : nest


(on second thought, I replaced the poem I just wrote with this weird one I wrote on Wednesday; today's poem seemed a bit inappropriate. sorry!)

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  2. Ok, second try all around. This one should be in couplets. I was obviously playing with verbs here and waiting for the eagle to do something.

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